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Analysis of Academic Article

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In Dennis Baron's From Pixels to Pencils, he employs many outside sources and references in order to make his argument stronger. His major claim in the academic piece is that as technology evolves and new forms of technology come about, they will be integrated into society and into the educational systems. To support this claim he has a continuum that discusses how technology evolves and eventually become ubiquitous in society. He uses the introduction of the pencil to bolster this claim about the continuum of technology. Baron discusses how Thoreau despised the use of a pencil rather than embracing it even though he spent much of his life perfecting the pencil with his father's pencil making company. Even though knowledgeable people like Thoreau were against the use of the pencil, it still became very widespread and changed writing and the way students are educated. 

 

He uses the academic book, Ancient Literacy by William V. Harris to argue that accessible technology is imperative to to having a literate population. In Harris' book, he attempts to discover how many people could read and write in the Ancient Greece and Rome. He does this by exploring the spread of literacy and some of the literature that was spread due to the changing technology. Harris examines each era and period of the Greek and Roman Empires and compares the various writing and technological systems. Baron uses this evidence to help bolster his claim that technology has a great effect on literature and writing. This is important to his claim that technology and literacy are both dependent on the accessibility and price of it. Baron paraphrases Harris by using the statistic that no more then ten percent of the Ancient Greek or Roman citizens were literate. He also uses this piece of evidence to enhance his claim about technology becoming affordable and ubiquitous. By using this piece of evidence, Baron makes his claim stronger because he makes the connection with his thesis and the main points of Harris' book. 

 

One of Harris' sources is a book by Frederick A.G. Beck called Greek Education 450-350 B.C. Beck's main focus in this book is to explore educational systems and the effects that they had on Greek society and life. He discusses all aspects of education including the effect of poetry, gender roles in education, and whether or not virtues can be taught. His major claim is that the main purpose of Greek education was to make productive and informed citizens to keep the direct democracy going. The evolution of the Greek education is also discussed within this book. Beck makes this claim based on substantial evidence in books and primary sources that explicate many aspects of the Ancient Greek educational system. Though Beck's book isn't quoted or paraphrased within Harris' book, it can be assumed that it was used to help build the argument that discusses the literacy levels of the ancient world. It can also be assumed that the book also adds to the claim that literacy levels and education has evolved as time has gone on. This would indirectly help Baron's claim about education because it shows changes in education and how education changes with the times and with societal changes. 

 

The claims made in Harris' and Beck's books do not complicate the major claim that Baron makes in his article. Harris discusses how highly accessible technology is very necessary to have a literate population. Beck's book explores the evolution of the Greek educational system as it changes between 450 and 350 BC. Neither of the claims complicate Baron's major claim because they both offer support to the idea that ubiquitous technologies change society and the educational systems of modern day and in the past. They support Baron's idea because they demonstrate evolution of the educational systems. In Beck's book, he discusses the various changes that have occurred in technology and their effect on education and literacy levels within a given society. The only complicating facet that Harris and Beck present is the idea that they only get their claims based on the Ancient Greeks and/or Romans. By only limiting their research and findings to the Ancient Greeks and Romans, it may suggest that they are the only ones that have had technology effect the evolution of their educational systems.  

 

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Comments (5)

Joe Essid said

at 8:36 pm on Oct 25, 2009

If you were to consult Socrates chat with the tech-savvy Phaedrus, in Plato's dialog of the same name, you would find Socrates quite critical of the new technology of writing. He felt it inferior to the art of the dialectician, which in his day meant the great speaker.

See if you can locate one of Harris' sources now. It would be interesting to see if Harris' has sources about the cheapness of a new technology. This may even help you with the final project, since the decreased costs of powerful computers and high-speed Internet access enables online gaming and virtual worlds to grow in popularity.

Also remind the reader here of how Harris' ideas "bolster" Baron's claim about the "great effect" of technology. What is that effect? My memory of this moment in the text is faint.

Sarah L. said

at 4:02 pm on Oct 29, 2009

GREAT INTRO!

- you need a comma after "Harris"

- you only use greek/roman literacy as evidence. although you write well, does this source have any more evidence? could you possibly provide quotes from the book? you talk about how Beck discusses different aspects- can you explain in more detail what he discusses? This could add to the length, provide more evidence, and be interesting

- other than that, this paper was written very well!

ian said

at 4:13 pm on Oct 29, 2009

- I'd live-link "From Pencils to Pixels" ---- and make sure it's pencils to pixels, not pixels to pencils
- Type-o: 2nd paragraph - "...is imperative to to ..." - take out one "to"
- Type-o: 2nd paragraph - "...in the Ancient Greece and Rome." - take out "the"
- Good vocabulary/verbs such as bolster....good job keeping away from "to be" verbs
-Type-o: 3rd paragraph - "...no more then ten percent..." -- should be "...no more than ten percent..."
- You still need to say how the claim is complicated through the sources
-Based on what you have, I think that you could possibly talk about the authors of the sources and the ethos associated with them. This will help in discussing how it complicates Baron's claims. Think about what kind of evidence these sources provide- be it first hand, academic research, etc

ian said

at 2:05 am on Nov 20, 2009

Overall well written. I would make the "isn't" into "is not" since this is a bit more formal of a write up. Also, I find it hard to believe that Harris' book does not complicate the overall claim at all, but I didn't explore this particular book so I cannot say for sure. But again, good in my opinion.

Jordan Smith said

at 4:38 am on Nov 20, 2009

This paper is very well written, but I have to agree that it is hard to believe that Harris' book dosen't complicate Barron's claim, but I did not look at the book, and you make a good arguement.

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