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My Academic Article Analysis

Page history last edited by michael.petrakis@richmond.edu 14 years, 5 months ago

 

 

 Dennis Baron's "From Pixels to Pencils" uses numerous outside references to deliver his claims more precisely. Dennis's key claim is that as new technology develops, it will have an even greater effect on society. It will allow people to be more efficient through communication at their own convenience. To support this argument, he discusses various sources throughout his article explaining how technology evolves and eventually becomes integrated into society. In Baron's article, he claims that the telephone is an outstanding contribution to society that was originally perceived as serving no use. In Caroline Marvin's book "When Old Technologies Were New", she explains the reality of the old idea of the telephone. People viewed the telephone as useless because it was "unable to record any permanent record of conversation." They were however very uninformed and naive to presume such an assumption. 

 

 Marvin illustrates that these people underestimated the power of technology. They thought since a phone call could not be written, it would serve no use. But, then they noticed that they no longer had to transport telegraphs, and instead could just make calls. The telephone literally connected the world. Even though originally people had communication issues with small details during a phone conversation, such as addressing "Hello" and "Goodbye", they became more used to it over time and took advantage of its opportunities in all types of communication. For instance, it allowed for major business improvements, immediate families, relatives, and friends could communicate easier, and overall it just improved everyday lives - every aspect of social and societal communication. Since Marvin wrote this book in 1988, it is apparent that she was not aware of technologies we have today, and therefore only mentioned the beginning stage of computers. This proves that communication technology, even though it is underestimated when it first develops, ultimately becomes a necessary and vital force in our daily lives today. Baron used this source to show that the future of society depends on the future of technology, and when that new technology comes, it must be welcomed and adapted. 

    

 The second major source that supports the claim that technology has an enormous effect on society is a book by Thomas Hughes, that illustrates the fact that society has developed based on the advancement of modern technology. Hughes' "Networks of Power" is a book about the innovation of technology and its conquering effect on society like a wave covering countries. He introduces the book talking about Thomas Edison's invention of electricity and it's affect on the world. Technological Inventions such as this "reveal variations in resources, traditions, political arrangements, and economic practices from one society to another and from one time to another." (Hughes 2) Technology, moreover, is the cause and effect of social change. Hughes examines many different electric power systems in three major cities; Berlin, Chicago, and London. He examined the role of technologies such as subways, coal industries, power stations, hot water supplies, and household appliances - all things we take for granted today. Even though all of these structures were introduced at different times, they all are related through the model of system evolution that has five phases of development: involving the creation of a product, to creating attention in other countries of a product, to observing the system growth and watching it acquire momentum, to a change in nature of society from the product. The final phase most directly influences technologies impact on society because it relates together the managers, financiers, and engineers who structure our material environment. Hugh's book shows that technology plays its own role in changing society. It is more dependent on the producer's view rather than the consumers because how well it goes through each phase will determine its success in society. In this way, it suggests that since the consumer does not have the ability to change technologies impact, whether the consumer initially approves of the product or not will not matter, as opposed to Baron's argument, because the producer will determine the impact of technology on society. 

  

 Marvin's view implies that the advancement of technology will depend on the consumer's approval of the new technology. This approval actually is irrelevant because even if people initially dislike a product, they will learn to appreciate the new technology and advantages it will have on their daily lives. By accepting and adapting this technology, people will live in a better society. Hugh's view fully agrees with Baron's claim because he states that technology has a direct impact on society. Technology is created and produced, and if it is an effective use then it will advance society. He also states that technology is the reason for social change, because it runs and controls society. As previously stated, it creates the resources, traditions, political arrangements, and economic practices that we use and have used since the start of our country. 

 

Works Cited

 

Baron, Dennis.  "Pencils to Pixels." Department of English, College of LAS, University of Illinois.  N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Nov. 2009. <http://www.english.illinois.edu/-people-/faculty/debaron/essays/pencils.htm

 

Marvin, Carolyn. When Old Technologies Were New : Thinking About Electric Communication in the Late Nineteenth Century. Oxford University Press, USA, May 1990.

 

Hughes, Thomas P., Networks of Power: Electrification in Western Society, 1880-1930, (Baltimore: The Johns Hopkins University Press, 1983).

Comments (3)

Joe Essid said

at 2:33 pm on Nov 3, 2009

You note, about Marvin, that users dismissed the phone because it was " 'unable to record any permanent record of conversation.' They were however very uninformed and naive to presume such an assumption."

Good call, so to speak :) Although voice communication can nowadays be easily recorded, back then it could not. That, for a LONG time, became an advantage of voice...on a phone or in person. It was very private, and not written records emerged.

Find one of Marvin's sources that talks about the ways in which a technology is at first dismissed but then later becomes universal. I'd recommend Hughes' Networks of Power as a good one. Others will do, too--check her sources from the sections on the phone.

Then, back to Baron: how do the two sources support or complicate Baron's (not Dennis', by the way) claim you picked, that a new communications technology "will allow people to be more efficient through communication at their own convenience."

Jane D said

at 5:12 pm on Nov 5, 2009

sup petrakis

YOUR CLAIM:
"This proves that communication technology, even though it is underestimated when it first develops, ultimately becomes a necessary and vital force in our daily lives today."

Here are my obsuhvations boii:
1. You suggest that forms of social networking communications (like facebook, twitter, myspace) are eventually going to be necessary. We will be literally unable to live without checking these sites.
2. You are a talented, but slightly relaxed writer. Maybe stepping up your analysis would give you that extra "umphf" that would lead you to your second point.
3. You reference your sources really well. I would like to see a little more "Mike Petrakis" though and a little less "Caroline Marvin," if you know what I'm sayin.
4. I love you and I think you're the best.
5. Follow Dr. Essid's suggestion of talking about how the two sources support or complicate Baron's claim. That is the meat and potatoes of this project.

Hope that helps boo. <333333

Ryan Papera said

at 4:56 pm on Nov 16, 2009

Mike,

Just to start, you have a few formatting issues. Indents in wikis are not ever needed. Simply use a space between your paragraphs, which you do as well. In your third paragraph you have a (2) citation, except there is nothing at the end of your paper that has a (2) for reference. What is the (2) for? Or have you not yet put in your works cited? Copy and paste this into a word document. You have a few spelling and grammar errors. Word will help you find and fix these.

In the opening, second sentence; I would use his last name and not his first. I don’t know if this is needed but I feel it would be more professional. Instead of using “It” you can say something more interesting like “This new technology…” Re-read the rest of your introduction because there is a misplaced period.

It is good that you gave an example of how the telephone WAS useful and not just a waste. However you can give more examples of how it helps “every aspect of social and societal communications.” Just try to qualify this claim. No one wants to see you get bricked.

Instead of putting Hughe’s book title in quotes underline or italicize. Caroline did not do this either, I am wondering if maybe I am getting this wrong. You should also use a colon instead of a semicolon before listing the three cities. If you copy this into a Word document you will find these minor mistakes.

In your closing you say that Marvin’s view implies that the advancement of technology depends on the consumer. This claim was not made till the last sentence of your second body paragraph. Maybe if you move that to the beginning of that body paragraph it will make it seem much more important.

A very good paper, but it still needs some editing. Keep working on it and it will get to be the best it can.

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